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Fairy Tale Narratives
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Thank you to the people that have made comments and suggestions about the children's writing. Some changes have been made and their second and possibly third drafts will be being uploaded over this week. Could you please continue reading their stories and giving them relective feedback on possible changes they could make to improve their story content.
The children should have introduced their evil character and be starting to develop the problem in the story. Comments on this part of their story would be greatly appreciated.
Each child is basing their story on a fairy tale they already know. They have been asked to create story using New Zealand scenery and Native animals. When you are reading see if you can recognise which fairy tale they may have adapted their stories from.
Click on the 'pdf' file to view student's work, then go to your parent's blog to make comment and feedback for the student. (click on the feedback blog below and then sign in with the password your child's teacher has given you). Don't forget to put the student's name in the title. Thank you for your support.

If you are not able to open the pdf file below click here to download Adobe

Feedback blog
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Aidan's blog


Deon



Slade


Cairo


Jack


Jared




Jean-Paul


Kaleb-Lee's blog


Liam
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Matthew


Nevyn



Oliver


Royce's blog


Abbey's blog




Haley's blog


Natalia


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Ashton


Hana


Hayley's blog


Kataeya


Sarah-Jane


Starsha's blog


Vanessa's blog