More+stories

= Thank you for becoming part of the Room 5 Kea writing process. We would appreciate any comments and suggestions about our writing. We have at least 1 draft, some of us have added changes and uploaded them for you to read. Could you please give relective feedback on possible changes we could make to improve our stories. We have introduced ourselves as the main character and we are starting to develop the story to make it more interesting. Comments on this part of our story would be greatly appreciated. = = Deep down I knew..... = =[|link to feedback blog]=